User blog:WhitePinoy/Anyone open to give a Critique.

I'm actually looking forward to getting a critique from someone on this site. My idea has balloned since it's last description, before only having 4 pages no up to 22 and still possibly growing in detail and description. I'm no longer afraid of copyright infringement/ thievery because the whole idea is going to be on a picture with my name slabed all over to prevent copyright.

Required:
 * An Authorative Figure or Admin
 * Respect and Trust
 * An experienced wiki member
 * Experienced with storylines
 * Experienced with audience interest
 * Not an Animator or someone who could thieve
 * Criticism to be constructive, not insulting

If you are an admin and I choose you for the critique. Please remove the image of the story idea immediately or any essence of it.

if I can't get a critique from anyone by August 1st, I will request this blog to be removed, and ask my teachers specialized with art and/or literature for a critique.