Talk:May I have this Ed?/@comment-4113880-20110703060723/@comment-224939-20110704023000

An excellent rewrite. It's almost as good as one of mine. My only complaint is that you added a link to the Kids pages more than once. For example, there should be only one blue link to Eddy's article on the entire page instead of linking it every time his name comes up. Other than that, nice rewrite.